A collaborative poem with Brett Little of Individual Expression of a Naive Mind.
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As my heaven burns in a motionless chaos,
Beaten by air and corroded by water,
Beyond sour blood, beneath the depths of agony,
Come and taste the dark,
the infinity within me.
Even though the time fades away,
Come and taste the mist,
The infinity within me.
A solitude that ascended to struggles of white days,
There is nothing but a trail of fleeting emptiness,
A rain of thoughts that rejected me with madness.
And with every subtle mouthful
I savour the flavour of our memories,
Their knowledge is the truth of our existence.
Through silence of scarce reasons,
Through a moment as black and
Withered as old iron,
I wander into a shadow,
Drowning in an abyss as your thoughts travel on.
Soft words full of reality,
The stale withered memories,
Beaten by air and corroded by water
drowned in tears alone.
Beyond sour blood, beneath the agony,
the facade of tattered ambiance,
Shall I weep?
Shall I fill rivers with tears?
Tell me, O lady of infinite roots,
Aren’t memories nothing but mist,
A mist misplaced?
Yet these clouds bring with them a sense of clarity,
A foreboding of the onset of a
Singular lonely snowfall that is paramount
To hiding the tracks of these empty roads.
Without light to navigate my intentions
I pray for nothing more then storms to surface,
For as sure as the lightning strikes
These moments it will guide me to the coastlines
That represent the memories
You once use to possess
I fear I’ve been abandoned,
Cast aside in your garden as
My words become nothing more
Then seedlings to conversation that may as well never existed,
Am I nothing more then the sustenance?
The Sustenance that is integral to your creation?
As the first of my tears drop
Your words warm the air around me,
My tears turn to mist,
As you call out to me,
“you are nothing more then the memories,
You seek in this cycle that binds us as one.”
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This particular poem is a little bit special, my dear readers. A poem that started as a simple comment on a post of one of the fellow blogger who is unbelievably talented. Brett Little. Or as he likes to call him, “Emo Who Loves Poetry.” And that he does, it’s almost unbelievable how he writes poem based on daily prompts. I’m almost envious. Ten minutes into the daily prompt and you’ll find a post of quality writing. I guess, inspiration has a soft soft for Brett.
I humbly request you that you check out his blog and if you like what you read, do show your support.
Now as a final note, check out the comments on this particular post (Hindsight is the mistress I want foresight to be) to see the thought process behind this particular poem.
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Brett is amazing at creating magic with words! I follow him and read all his posts, which are way too surreal . Great collaboration indeed. 👍😊
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I agree and it was a fun little process which we did in the comment section. A poem was born, so to say, just out of sheer respect for each other’s abilities. 🙂
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Wow! Brilliant it is when creative minds join to produce worthwhile pieces!
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I’d love to collaborate with you too, if you ever allow it. 🙂
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Haha! Oh I would definitively love too do so Nitesh. But I’m so bad at spending time on WordPress that I would feel terrible if I can’t put as much effort as you and Brett have, to craft this wonderful piece. Maybe we should try over a weekend or so when I’m not working! 😊😊
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By all means Vandana, but just so you know that we wrote it in just 20 minutes. That was the point, writing whatever the other’s words inspired us to write. We did it only in comments. 🙂
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Whoa that’s some seriously exceptional way to work! Impressive of you and Brett! 👏😄
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Thank you. 🙂
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I would love to read a piece you two would write together, you are both extremely talented and the nature of the way you both write would marry extremely well.
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Well let’s see if we’d be able to do that or not. 🙂
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A beautiful piece, by two exceptionally talented people 🙂
This is certainly not something you get to read everyday, very well written!
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Thanks a lot, Bisma. I thought it might have gotten just a little too convoluted. 🙂
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No, I think it has just the right amount of everything, very well done 🙂
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Too much praise. 🙂
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