A Love Story? – Chapter Thirty One

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Published by Nitesh Mishra

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36 thoughts on “A Love Story? – Chapter Thirty One”

  1. Congratulations on 200 followers, Nitesh !
    Now that that’s out of the way, lets have some real talk 🙂
    This story was just mind blowing Nitesh, like literally somehow the conflict just ripped me into pieces but then at the same time it made me satisfied in a weird way.
    I felt like there was a constant tug of war between Radhika and Sandhiya, I couldn’t decide who was right but maybe that is how it is, they were both right in their own twisted manner. ( But somewhere in between I got a little biased and secretly sided with Sandhiya 🙂 )
    You carried it all so well, the way you have portrayed the pain, the helplessness Atul faces is just beautiful. Even in its need to be dark and hopeless, the pain feels so intimately linked with an intrinsic brightness, an emerging light.
    Okay before I turn your comments section into a hundred word long essay, I’d like to say all in all, this story was stunning master piece! 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  3. Yes, a good ending and I did see the question mark….hmmm, possibly another chapter looming telling about his success? R is very understanding, too much so for me, but maybe she has other interests also? I’m not blaming anyone. I feel it is possible to love more than one person. I’ve done it. Not at the same time however.

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      2. Thanks for your support throughout the story. Your kind and encouraging word played a major role in completion of this story. Hopefully, I justified your dedication to the story.

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  4. Tenses are a pain when you’re trying to write some thing. I have problems with it. Someone wrote that writing in the first person is more likable. So I try to do that. I’m no judge about things like that. I just ignore all that detsil! : ))

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      1. That’s why my stories are short and what you said, to the point. Once in a blue moon I’ll go as long as thousand words because I get carried away. Then I find out I needed to stop at 800!! So I just go for the flash. I like trying the challenges and try not to get too serious.

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  5. Nice ending, yes I like the question mark, thoroughly enjoyed the 30 day trip, that was a lot of work, you should feel really good about it, not everything but bits and pieces really hit home as I’m sure it did for all the readers

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      1. I really thought you did a great job tying everything together by going from chapter to chapter, nobody’s story got lost as everything was weaved together, I didn’t feel like there were any tangents that never got tyed back in

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      2. Thanks a lot. Four of you, you’ve been quite supportive, I don’t why. But I want you to know that I feel true gratitude for your responses, your comments, your constant reminder that you were waiting for the next part. I couldn’t have done it without any of you, I’m a bit emotional and dramatic right now, I know. But taking challenges is one thing and finishing them is another. Every single one of you ensured that I stick to the task and not quit. Thank you.

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