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13 thoughts on “A Love Story? – Chapter Twenty Six

  1. Nitesh, this is so well written !
    Only a few people dare to write what should be written, speak against what needs to be condemned and I’m happy that you are among those few.
    Keep up the good work, my friend ! :):)

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      1. There’s just a few “tense” errors and things like that-probably just from writing fast, I’m sure you’ve seen these on subsequent reads, the content and how you have pieced the story together is great, each post ties nicely with the other posts, I want to keep reading because I’m not sure who’s going to get hurt, who’s going to be saved, can there be a happy ending or a realistic ending, how will the characters lives be changed? All interesting questions which keeps me interested. I love the discriptions of the city and society which make it meaningful for someone on the other side of the world to be able to draw comparisons to our situations, it really shrinks the world.

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      2. Yeah, with tenses, the issue became something like this, by the time I was writing the next chapter, I had no idea in what tense was i writing the previous chapters, as you might now, I didn’t had the luxury to go back to the previous chapter and re-edit.
        Thanks for the review. 🙂 🙂

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  2. Hi Nitesh..I nominated you for a Mystery Blogger Award! This is in no way obligatory. But I hope you participate. “Mystery Blogger Award” is an award for amazing bloggers with ingenious posts. Their blog not only captivates; it inspires and motivates. They are one of the best out there, and they deserve every recognition they get. This award is also for bloggers who find fun and inspiration in blogging; and they do it with so much love and passion. Okoto Enigma

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