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56 thoughts on “A Love Story? – Chapter Ten

      1. And thank you for reading it, it might seem a bit dramatic, but it does mean the world to me, when my writing gives some sort of emotional sense, you know what i’m trying to say.


  1. Wow! ( I understand now.) —- Brilliant! ~~~~~~ ” She rambled away her life, in my arms, in words decorated by tears her anger erupted like a volcano. Maybe her anger had shimmered for just a little too long.” ~~~~~ Absolutely brilliant! So many great lines, I can’t count. Impressive. Literally spent you must be now. !Write that book! Not just responses. If you haven’t already, write a book!

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