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21 thoughts on “A Love Story? – Chapter Seven

  1. No, no, no! Not just two or theee chapters! This is captivating, and I can’t yet comment really on what I just read, since it’s like I just walked through a Moroccan spice market on a most brilliant day. Emotions, colors, scent, objects, thoughts thoughts thoughts, an overload of it. In a good, pulling way. Will follow up and read it once more. There was something I missed, and I can’t put my finger on it.

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  2. “We can only sympathize with someone but we can never live their turmoil, we can never breathe their existence.”
    This is soo true, I have always thought that empathy is better than sympathy but even when we empathize with the other person, it only benefits us, it only gives us more awareness to deal with a similar situation, it doesn’t change the adversity that they have to face. There is only so much we can do for someone because at the end of the day they have to decide in which direction they choose to steer their ship.
    Nitesh I have read this series once, twice, three times and every time it has given me soo much to think about, soo much to ponder over. Every time your words have made better sense than the previous time and realy, it has all left me confused, in a good way … if that makes any sense.

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    1. Hey, You still wrote quite clearly. Don’t forget, I’m the guy who wrote, “Rain makes me happy. Mondays make me angry and working my way to my office on a rainy Monday morning just makes me sad. Now that is one pathetic looking cocktail.” 🙂
      See, how clear your words are. 🙂

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      1. Hahaha, it just sounded a bit distorted in my head but I couldn’t have put it in better words. And trust me that doesn’t sounds pathetic at all. As a person who lacks consistency in her own thoughts I appreciate it when I come across like minded people. 🙂

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